topic When the relationship between you and your parents has trouble
main theme
i want to illustrate some problems that teenagers often fight over thier parents. (EX. when your parents blame on you when you don't do well on your exam, or compare you with your siblings...)
why do these problems happened? physical problems or result in mental problems.
i want to find more problems between parents and kids, and i'll try to find out some partucular examples that's differnt from those "normal" ones.
i want to find out which way is the best to communicate with your parents.
i want to interview some people claim that they have a harmony relationship with their parents, and if it's true, i would want to know how can they keep such a ideal relationship.
(i want to interview few kids and also some parents, espically mothers)
i want to share if i'm stucking in the same situation with my interviewers, what will i do. what are the advantages and disadvantages of using that way? And if mine isn't good enough or even made the situation much more complicated, what can i do?
conclusion
(i'm still thinking about this one, and i don't want to set so quickly because even though myself cannot sure what kind of conclusion will i get in the end)
Can we state the topic and the main theme with a few words?
回覆刪除Here is my example:
Topic: How to improve relationship with parents
Main idea: Suffering from mis-communication with my mom, I am prompted to study the causes and other people's cases. In the end, I come up with some good ideas to better our relationship.
Topic sentence for the 1st paragraph:
Topic sentence for the 2nd paragraph:
Topic sentence for the 3rd paragraph:
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