Topic : How to Improve relationship with parents
Main Idea:
Suffering from mis-communication and misunderstanding with my mom, I decided to study about raltionships of those families which are having similiar troubles as I do. Finally, I research and found a lot of information to connect with my project.
Topic sentences for 1st paragraph : What made mw want to do this topic?
Topic sentences for snd pargraph: Why do we fight over our parents?
Topic sentences for 3rd paragraph: How to solve the problems?
I'll think about my topic sentences again because i think it's kind of... strange.
Yes. Take topic sentence 1 for example. I would write it this way:
回覆刪除I am interested in studying child-parent relationship because I have communication problems with my mom.
sub-point 1: We have miscommunication issues because she is very demanding.
sub-point 2: ...
sub-point 3: ...
Topic sentence 2:
(Instead of saying why, state the reasons in the topic sentence directly.)
I think topic sentence 1 and 2 can be combined together. I'd change the topic of the second paragraph to: The problem between me and my mom prompts me to do research on other people's relationship with their mothers, and I learn that ...
Topic sentence 3: State the solutions to the problem in the topic sentence.